Gambition 拓展写作-描绘景色-没毛病 初稿

At the first sight,the picture's primary hue is very dark.It is just a corner of the whole forest with many young trees stand here,A stream flows peacefully among them,and it seems come from far away.A burly trunk across over the stream.I have no idea what kind of tree it is,but it has many short but sharp branches sticking out like spikes in the hands of worriors.What below is another slimer trunk which apparently is not the same kind as it and it has more intricate branches.The sunlight sprinkles down the stream through the trees and branches adding a bright color for it.

Darked leaves scattered here and there,some float on the water,some lay on the rock.A rock covered with moss is right in the water and narrows it in the half way.And the forestgreen moss in another burly trunk in front of the rock turn into greenyellow,what a lovely color.The crimson and darkgreen combined a gorgeous view!

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