雅思写作Task2真题解析

雅思写作Task2真题解析　 :

        写作题目：

　　Throughout the history, people dream to build aperfect society while they haven't agreed how theideal society would be like.

　　What is the most important element for a perfectsociety? What can people do to achieve an idea

　　题目讲解：

　　1. Introduction

　　1)背景信息：Various social problems have emerged together with the social development.

　　2)引出话题：With the wish to prevent the society from developing in the wrong path, peoplehave never stopped discussing about what the destination of social development should be.

　　2.回答第一个问题：什么是构成理想社会的最重要因素

　　a.提出前人观点

　　关键词句推荐：A Utopian society has been believed to be what human beings should seek for. Without anything called the private property, people living in the Utopia are free from crimes, wars, starvation and oppression.

　　b.提出自己观点：理想社会应该是一个人人都有平等机会的社会。

　　关键词句推荐：However, in my personal opinion, people do not really need a society where theyhave nothing to fight for. Instead, the perfect society should offer everybody equalopportunities to make them what they are born to be.

　　3.回答第二个问题：如何建成理想社会

　　a. 合理的竞争制度

　　关键词句推荐：In order build an ideal society, proper competition system would be required. Such a system will make sure that the winners are only the most talented ones, instead ofthose with special background.

　　b. 一个为所有人服务的政府

　　关键词句推荐：For the sake of the effective operation of such a system, a fair and service-oriented government is essential. Such a government will make sure that all its policiesbenefit everybody in the society.

　　4. Conclusion

　　重申观点：In conclusion, an ideal society should offer freedom and equal rights to all itsmembers