2019.2.16 雅思写作解析

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大陆考区题目解析


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TASK2:题型参阅 

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Nowadays,children spend too much time  watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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如果写成看太长时间电视或玩电脑游戏会损害孩子们的视力,那么就跑题了。题目中问的是对于mental abilities的影响,所以要搞清楚的是 mental abilities 是什么?


在我看来,限定词 mental abilities 可理解为智力、心理和社交能力。


题目大意:有的人认为孩子们花过多的时间看电视和玩电脑游戏,对于他们的mental abilities有不良影响。


因为题目中有 too much time,所以我们写弊端更容易。


个人观点:我同意题目观点。注意限定词 mental abilities


弊端1:长时间看电视和打游戏,导致孩子们没有时间进行社会交往 socialize with their peers,影响到他们的社交技能和情商 social skills and emotional intelligence,有的人可能会说打游戏也需要队友之间的配合cooperation between team members,但是这种虚拟世界virtual space 里面的游戏不能取代真实生活中的体育活动或者朋友聚会,那些脱离现实的孩子不知道怎样融入社会 get integrated into society。


弊端2:电视里面的故事和真实的生活有一定差距 gap between the fiction and reality,长时间看电视容易不仅容易上瘾 get addicted,还会损害孩子们的解决实际问题的能力 damage their problem-sloving ability。如果在现实生活中遇到挫折encounter setbacks,他们很容易变得沮丧become frustrated,而且电视和游戏里面还充斥着一些暴力内容 be inundated with violence,长期打游戏的孩子可能变得冲动易怒 aggressive and irritable,习惯用暴力解决问题use violence to settle disputes。


弊端3:长时间看电视的孩子们容易变懒(毕竟整天窝在沙发或躺在床上),导致孩子们缺乏独立思考的能力 lack the ability to think independently,而且想象力容易受到限制 be restricted in their imagination,因为所有的画面都被呈现在他们面前 be presented before them。而沉迷于某一种游戏的孩子 be addicted to a certain game,他们的眼光和视野一定是非常狭窄的 have a narrow vision,如果他们用这个时间去读书和旅游,可以让自己变得博学 become knowledgable,还能开拓视野 broaden their horizon。


温馨提示:2019年依旧会大概率重现2015-2016年的原题,请注意查漏补缺!


1-2月已经考过 女性参军、食物浪费、城市建设、互联网替代博物馆、看电视和玩游戏对孩子们的影响等话题,接下来请重点关注社会类其他分支题目(如广告、犯罪和道路安全等)、科技类、教育类;小作文预警线状图、流程图;


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20160618 It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 


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